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"Through Fire & Sea" by Nicole Luiken was really hard to connect with the characters. I couldn't find any connection to them at all. They seemed so flat and uninteresting. This story is given to the reader with such a unique plot that just seemed to fail when executed out. It seemed like everything was just underdeveloped and not thought out at all. The story wasn't horrible but I think it could have been much better. I found myself uninvested in the story or the characters because I just couldn't get into the story. I really wanted to like this novel, but I just couldn't. No matter how hard I tried I just couldn't find myself invested. My advice would be to work on the character development some more and try to write characters that someone can love or invest themselves into.