Dazzled by Books

I ended up with the first eARC. Then the author updated it so I downloaded the second eARC. The second eARC was much better than the first however “Nirvana” was still not the book for me. Having read the first eARC and then getting the second one it is really hard not to compare the two. The characters ages changed. It seemed like bits and pieces of the story were disappearing. I really didn’t like it. I feel like both of the drafts came out way too soon for the story. It isn’t completely developed or thought out like it should be.