The Plot -
The plot of "Wrath of the Fallen" has a bit of a slow start. The story begins by introducing all the characters. I feel like the pace would have moved a bit faster if it wasn't all at the beginning. The story concept and plot was well done. I think Jerome has a lot of interesting ideas that he writes into the story.
The Writing -
The writing was quite well. Jerome has a wonderful writing style. I think the writing style was a lot better in the first half of the book. The editing of this story could have been a bit better. There are some errors that could have been avoided with better editing. There were grammatical errors that were a bit distracting.
The Ending -
The ending of "Wrath of the Fallen" was a bit rushed. I feel like some of the plot points were dropped. I do hope that the loose ends will be picked up in book two. I hope the resolutions in book two will be a bit better too.
Wrap Up -
"Wrath of the Fallen" by Kristopher Jerome is a great debut novel. I am looking forward to seeing what happens next.
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